뉴질에서 워홀하고 한국으로 돌아왔는데요, 나중에 워크비자 등 대비위해서 경력증명서가 필요할 거 같아 일했던 오너에게 경력증명서를 달라 요청을 했는데  연락이 없네요. 절대나쁘게 끝내지 않았구요.

This is to bring to your kind notice that I had served XXX as a XXXX from Oct 23,2018 till Feb 9,2019  in your kitchen. It was a tremendous journey and I learned a lot working in your esteemed organization. I really appreciate the opportunities the company provided me for my professional growth and it added great value to my profile.

I am writing this mail to request you to issue my experience certificate. I would be much obliged if you consider issuing me my experience certificate.  This would help me immensely in my future career prospects.

Yours’ sincerely 

이렇게 experience certificate달라고 요청햇는데, 맞게 보낸거 맞죠?